def a good listen
it needs some more variation in the drum work. If you want some advice I would go for more obscure samples than the ones you are working with on fruity loops.
Scour the internets and take anything that isnt boarded down with a gay copyright preventing you from taking it.
People who are idm heads spend endless hour arguing about what is IDM and what isn't I would ignore them and their low voting. Basically you are more or less hitting the mark and that's all thats really required.
Thx for the advice dude.