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Dark rap loop

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First attempt at a rap loop but kinda sounds like my other music - -1:05



This is the third song of yours I have heard, I like them all so far.

chead86 responds:

Thnx man

i give yu an 8

but only because this is yur first rap beat, some constructive criticism...

it sounds like tha beat drops at tha wrong time, drop it at tha end of 4 beats or 8 beats, and make sure it sounds smooth when it restarts tha drums and snares. Tha instrument stopped too suddenly, put in a crash or suttin to hide that, or juss fade the instrument while adding another one. The drums werent high enough for a hip-hop song.
ummm...the drums n snares sound like DnB, i c you use fl studios so for example get yur snare and hats and kicks rede, change the amount of red and black boxes to eight, (its on tha top left of where you load the different instrumentsand set tempo to 100 for this one), then do this... for example...
1 is a kick
2 is a snare
3 is an empty space

1 3 3 3 2 3 3 3 3 3 1 3 2 1 3 3

1 3 3 3 2 3 3 3 3 3 1 3 2 3 1 3

thas 18, iight i hope that works as a good example, i check out every hip-hop beat so ill look out for yur next one.

ya fellow hip-hop beat maker

chead86 responds:

thanks for the review, i appreciate it. its good advice, but one thing that seems messed up is that the drums did start at the right time, i checked it. I thought it sounded weird too when i heard it. Anyways, thx i'll do another one soon.

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Credits & Info


3.00 / 5.00

Aug 9, 2004
10:10 PM EDT
Hip Hop - Modern
File Info
1 MB
1 min 5 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.