Nice

So this is a nice track it has a nice ocean feel here and that's what I liked about it it also has a nice motion feel so anyways great track not sure where you what you would change on this one but I do know it's a solid piece with even a twist of mystery behind the sounds but that's my take on things so my opinion here is it's a solid piece of sound work you have here anyways good luck on your next piece

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Really I found no need to change anything it's at it's best possible potential

~X~

You Can Feel the Trance Between Your Teeth!

I love this, the diving into the ocean at the beginning with a little hesitation was amazing and the little beat you added near the one and a half mix was good and even though it was technoish, you added a little orchestration with the claves in there. Yes I am a percussion freak and I'm not afraid to say it. Keep up the awesome work!

The Adventures on The Open Sea

The ocean. She calls to us with such voices that we follow it. Three brave young men aboard their ship in search for treasure. As they fight off deadly pirates that come within their path. Then within a Kitchen a mother washing dishes looks out the window to see her three sons playing outside, using their imaginations. I remember a time like this, I even enjoyed a time like this... this song has given me some ideas and has helped me remember some things... for one I'm glad your song has helped me to remember some of my life, but at the same time I now hate you, but don't feel bad... that is the last thing I want to bear your shoulders. Your audio was very well done I do believe you could do better in the Classical genre, but exploring new genres is the purpose of a creator's existence... I for one know this quite well. Amazing audio, I can only hope you keep up the good work.

Sincerely,
The-Great-One

California

Reminds me of the life I once had in California with my beloved father <3
thx for bringing back beautiful mmemories of my childhood in a wonderfully written musical piece... <3
Keep it coming.

Awesome

I love it for the actual music, and how it brings back memorys =].

-Aidan