What there was in this song, I liked. The guitar parts were nice, I particularly enjoyed some of the harmonies. The song was laid back and atmospheric and there were some nice licks in the lead part. The main riff itself wasn't bad either.
The trouble is there was a lack of any progression from the first theme, the song didn't really go anywhere. For me, not including drums and bass is also pretty unforgiveable, I was left thinking how much more awesome it would have been if there were some lumbering bass line and pounding drums to really set things off. The trouble of the lack of change in the song meant that it felt like one giant intro, particularly with the lack of percussion. Three minutes of intro with nothing else isn't going to impress many people on here.
I do see the seeds of a good idea in here, and I would like to hear it within a proper song that feels like a lot of work and effort went into it, which this unfortunately doesn't. Admitting your own song 'fell together' and is 'a little sloppy' doesn't really do yourself any favours.
1.69 / 5.00 (+ 0.22)