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Metal & Dirt (Forced Rhymes

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This song resurfaced on my iTunes after two months of not listening to it. Enjoy!



this song is amazing...I think that the only thing I had an issue with was the other voice that came in (think it was still you, just another track or something)...I think it would have sounded better sung in harmony, not just doubling the track...but it still sounded nice...the song is great, the lyrics are nice, your voice is stunningly accurate for this song...I'm adding you to my favorites :)

please do check out my song if you get a chance.

gh0stchild33 responds:

You can bet your ass I'll check your stuff out. I'm really glad that there's a community of songwriters on this site that can appreciate one another's songs. Thanks for the review.

Lovely, yet again


this is very nice. :D

i like your lyrics, and the soft guitar. Eay to listen to, yet, it makes me pay attention to wha tyou're saying. For some reason. i picture a city, downtown, at night. :3

Another Great Acoustic Song

I love this. I'm a huge fan of acoustic songs. And don't listen to people like Coolers, he doesn't have any songs of his own.

I also like the shitty recording style. Not only does it add a unique touch, but its proof that you don't need to be rich or have a lot of fancy equipment to make good music.

I'll keep an eye out for your new songs,
keep up the good work and don't let zerobombers change your style.

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gh0stchild33 responds:

Thanks man. Rock rock on. (strongbad reference ftw!)

you can

You can try better.

gh0stchild33 responds:

A 1 and "you can try better" doesn't help me out. What did you not like about the track? The production is poor, I know. I only own a cheap Tascam DP-01 digital 8-track for crying out loud. So was the songwriting poor? Were the vocals lacking?

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Credits & Info

3.60 / 5.00

Feb 22, 2008
2:22 PM EST
File Info
3.8 MB
4 min 12 sec

Licensing Terms

Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.