Very well,

I love the sounds of your music Mr. Minso, By the way it seems more like a subgenre of Electronic Rock/Heavy Metal, I give it 4 Stars because it is petitive, and the sounds are the same, by the way, this does not need to be for adults and adolescents, because it does not contain a vowel that is profane, it should be for children, adults and adolescents (SFW/E), continuing with the theme of sounds...

I recommend that you make the rhythms more original and that it is more Heavy Metal, and not so Electronic Rock/Techno-Rock, but otherwise it is and good and has to be improved, and it is a song for adults and teenagers, then you have to add vocals and it is data, You're welcome! :)

//~SSJ4-Valentin15