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this is another of the 12, you gotta listen to at least 30 seconds, if you dont go that far in, dont bother rating

and it gets really good around 1:20(at least i think so)

so give this song a listen, and hopefully a review, as i need input lol


cool the best

this is awsome it is so awsome what do you use to make these

linkbryan1126 responds:

i use garage band, ive been told to get somehting better, but i think people just under estimate it


Nice job! The best part was around 01:30 or so, where you have a solid beat and cool lead sounds in the background. Your transistions were really good! One thing i was thinking about was, maybe you could've done something with the drums. i dunno what, but maybe adding a "flanger" effect or at least change them a bit more often. But that's probably just me, cause i love drums :P
Keep up the beat, dude!

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linkbryan1126 responds:

thank you, yeah i agree with you about the drums but...i suck at drums lol, il just have to keep practicing

Nice transitions

Pretty nice beats, I like how they flow from one to another. However I felt that it needed some different melodies over-top the normal ones, to spice it up. Good job though!

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voted 5

Really cool song. I really like your choice of leads as well as pads. They both come together well.
The kick was a little weak for my tastes. The bass could have been a tad higher as well.
Other than that pretty interesting song.
Nice work, keep it up.
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
PS: Check out my latest song "So It Begins [F]"

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Not too shabby

Seems to need a bit more , something .. I really like the beat when it first comes in, that's really enjoyable. Maybe try layering your drum tracks :D

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linkbryan1126 responds:

this is why i love reviews, real feed back, gives me something to go on to get better

no this is gonna sound emberressing and silly,

explain what you mean by "layering" my drum tracks
*prepairs for worst*

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3.88 / 5.00

Feb 20, 2008
10:56 PM EST
File Info
7.1 MB
5 min 11 sec

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