thats an awesome beat man.
the lyrics are pretty good to,
but u could make i sound better if u rapped with a little more energy
the second rappers pretty good,
and the spanish part is downright cool
keep 'em comin'
i can relate
trust me,i can relate like a muh fuka. i even dig the beat but i love the flow so much beter. tell yourdj,b-boy,whatever ya'll got to not try to hard. it's good but i feel like he was tryin to much. dont ever let nothin stop your shine,EVER!
what a work of art.
Great job! Lots of effort put into this I can see I love this mad rap, yo.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.