aaaa, so much promise!!
Great begining, clear idea. Fanstastic brum intro, my favorate type, the off beat intro.
After the first cycle though, you started to change the supersound, left the drums alone. . . no.
The highlight of your song should have been the drum beat. Keep the highsound as is, and mix up the drum beat. Go a little Jugle like, double beats and skipes, breaks and restarts. . . would be fantastic.