I like watching D-Grayman too, I liked the melody too, and I like the imagery that you've provided. It does fit the scene you just described.
(You knew it was never this simple right? :P)
It's repetitive, esp for those who have selective vision - those who just skip everything that looks remotely like a text. For the lack of variation, I'm sorry, but it does take away quite a bit of points.
Thanks for the review...and I can appreciate your opinion becuase I figured that it needed a bit more diversity and I hope you continue you review my musik so I might improve into a fiarly unique artist.
Beggining of .............
Build this into something chron
Thankz for the review and I will definitely take that into consideration....please continue review my musik.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.