here's what I think...

I really like what you did with the guitar, got really creative with the riffs. You made it sound different enough to be interesting but similar enough to be totally recognizable.

The only trouble is, the guitar is really rough around the edges. Now, that's probably more of an issue with the program that you're using than with any deficiency of your own. So, if possible, I'd suggest you tool around with it so soften it a little (if that's even possible, I don't know anything about these programs) or even upgrade your program and remix it.

Clean up the guitar, kick up the bass & drums a little (just a little, because they're almost perfect the way they are) and you could have one of the gest Gerudo remixes on the site.

The final result is just average, but because your composition is awesome I'm giving you a 5 and a 7. Because I'm fucking benevolent like that.

Don't know about gentle, but......

I liked it. I liked it alot. If only you have some other tools rather than FL Slayer. It's not a bad tools, but this song could have been epic if You had one of those $500 VST plugins. ^_^ j/k I still think that it's a good remix. BTW this song can never have to many remixes ^_^