I forgot to mention this in your other song but it applies here - you NEED to find stronger drums, especially the kick. Bass was a bit too loud, try to tone that down. I did like the feel of the song though. I really think you have lots of potential but somewhat weak instruments are getting in your way.
Oh, and is this song supposed to have some anarchist message or something?? Just wondering.
yea, its supposed to have a governmental message
in the beginning its soft words spoken by the gov't that indicate bad things to happen; then the reality is the hardness of the guitar after the pause
and the retarded ending shows future demise and how we arent doing anything to stop a bad future from comming