this is gonna be my outro for a adventure map no doubt

DarkbearX ;)

So yeah, I'm review this.

Pretty clean intro, yeah. I like the chord progression.

The melody is good also, great job with that. But your drums are acting in the low-end way too much, eq them more around the mid-high pass and add a low-cut filter on them for good measure.

There's no sub-sonic sounds! Make sure your song has adequate bass.

Besides the two things I've mentioned, this is definitely a good piece of music. Keep up the great work man!

Wow

You could really feel the emotion in that. I love it, just not so big a fan in the synth drums.

a summary

good job, i liked it more after i knew the thoughts behind it, something to relate to i suppose.