The beginning is nice and joyfull, but it got a lil' repititive in a way. I liked the tempo change you did. The second part you did was good. but repititive too. Very good job.
Thanks. I've updated it and mixed it up more now, so hopefully it sounds less repetitive.
A couple of duff notes, but...
I think this is a good song, but that main thing you had going against you was "1, 1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3, 1, 2, 3, 4, % ^!" Those last two notes sounded a bit flat to my ears. Consider knocking them around a little, just to get it sounding a little better.
Yeah, I liked the tempo shift, as you played it nicely, giving the whole tune a well balanced feel. I wouldn't reccomend it as a loop though, because ti can be quite a shock hearing the slower tempo replaced by the fast stuff.
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Thanks for the review. I'm not quite sure I understand the number thing, you've got there ^_^
But, the two notes that sound dissonant, they were meant to be that way. The dissonance was a device I used to break up the constant happy vibe, a few accidentals here and there adds cheek and makes the song much more colourful, without the accidentals, it would be the same as any old upbeat happy piano tune. Thanks for the review, I understand your issues with it, but if you listen to some ragtime music, there'll be a whole lot more dissonance and accidentals to what I used.
I like the rhythm... it has a unique style
the piano was pretty amazing... it started like a 'happy piano' & was pretty nice.. & kind of funny to heard it... because it was fast.. it really make you move...
and then... it gets slow & more & more slow... that was an amazing effect
sound like the pianist was getting tired, let say the pianist was getting a calm...
was an effect that you don't see on Ng all the time...
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Yeah, I've tried to incorporate a fair few things into this song that I don't hear nearly as often as I should, and that'd be key changes (haven't done that yet, but probably will), tempo changes and accidentals, tasteful dissonance is hard to find...
Thanks for the review!
I love it as a composition.
Yeah, more variations, some more mastering and it should turn out kewl.
Can't wait till the finished song ^__^
thanks man. I'm also keen to see where this goes. =P
There's something about this I'm not too keen on but I can't quite put my fingure on what it is, maybe I'm just not keen on the style. Anyway, it doesn't sound too bad, I mean the piano is very well played in this and really comes together very well, also it has a nice back beat to it which is very good.
The tempo through the whole things changes pretty well too, which is good, there's nothing here that can really be improved on in my opinion. The ending is well done too, so good work overall.
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Thanks for the compliments. <3
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