Nice

So there was some nice slow paced feel on this the sound slowly builds up into something even more with the quality getting even better on this one and I really like the stylish sound you have added to this piece it was not short either so that was a big plus on things as well but anyways overall a great piece some awesome sound works some really good stuff here no changes on this either it's some really good sound works

~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
No changes on this beautiful sound

~X~

voted 4

Interesting song. What really caught my ear was the jazzy feel of this song. I really liked that quality. It reminds me of old school rap (My favorite by the way).
The beat was good. It was chill and laid back. Something I could bob my head to.

The vocals were decent. I wasn't sure whether or not that was a person's voice or it was sped up. It sounded a little strange and caught me off guard a little.
The overall song was good. I quite enjoyed it. Nice work.
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)

Well-rounded track

The beat is very nice. The beat could be used all by itself. The trumpet line is a great filler for the chorus, however, it didn't completely fill. If you couldn't get a sung chorus by the person doing background vocals, I would recommend a rapped, double voiced chorus to add to the flow.

Now, the lyrics are very deep but could be slightly better. I would advise a longer rhyming phrase. Use about four to eight lines of the same rhyming scheme to achieve a great flow. Not saying that your flow is bad because it's very original; but, try to step back a bit on the annunciation, it could add a bit to your flow. But, do not make it so the listener cannot here your lyrics. Just a few thoughts, but great job! Very well-rounded track.

Woo!

A really nice and jazzy track, great melody in this. A slow melodic pace, with lots of variational effects and a nice thumping background beat. The words flow through it all like a falling waterfall, an ounce of bounce and a form of abnormality. Special and slowly flowing, it goes oh yeah it's going the flow is fresh and wallows over puddles river shallows like a swallow flies and dives and dies and crashes down and crushed by grime and dust and soft and shallow rhyme combined. You have me inspired . . .

-cd-

Great flow

dont listen to a lot of Rap/Hip Hop admittingly but this rap right here is pretty legit. Good selection of the beat (although I'd prefer for artists to make their own) I like the percussion, piano chords and strings harmony, and the brass during the interludes. It's a real chill beat.

I don't know how to really grade lyrics, but what I do know is that you definetly got a great flow. The beat was relatively fast and you keep up with it with ease. Pretty smooth rap voice, and well recorded vocals with no unwanted noise from what I can hear. Favorite line in third verse "Last but not least let me send my rest and peace to my brother and father in the East" and "a band of brothers with hands faster than Jackie Chan"..something like that...anyway, can't think of much criticism for this track, maybe if you wanted to put like one downtempo chorus rap during the brass interlude as it was mostly just rapping on the verse phrases. Certainly not a flaw tho.

keep up the good work!