When you experiment, you usually come out with results. You didn't really explain why you were experimenting, what results you planned on getting compared to what you did get and what the overall results were. Yes, the sound effects are kind of cool, but there just sound effects that don't really change through out the whole 2 minute track.
I found this track to be very long, boring, not interesting and seems not a lot of time put into it.
RIght at the beginning there seems to be what sounds like water and rocks mixed together XD. That I like about this song, and I think it would be good in a flash where you are inside a building... Nice melody to it, and keep it up!
i like the style...
the more I listen...the better it becomes. I like this track - i think the length at which it draws out tiny elements of progression should necessitate however that the song is much longer and reaches an apex of some sort. The idea is right - but I just keep waiting for the break to cut in and everything to go hog wild. If it was meant solely as a sort of background piece however then I suppose it would be more fitting.