Nice beat

Nice beat on this one, I like the sound on this why its twelve seconds long I dont know but could use more to it maybe some added mixture to it or something, but you do have a nice flavor about this one just wish this piece was a tad bit longer and with more mixture anyways nice tune here.

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nice flavor about this one just wish this piece was a tad bit longer and with more mixture

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Didn't like it

I can make sense of it, but it's just not favorable to the ear.