You mixed everything in very well.
And turned most different(Genre) noises
into one of a dance or techno.
which is pretty cool.
So it seems like it took a long time for you to make.5/5
This is god for your first
Turn down the volume on the melody and add more samples, pads, then it would start to be something good cause if you mess enough around with the melody of yours it can get really good, keep up the good stuff and you'll master it for sure.
Check out my latest song and write a review please =D
Thanks for the adivce, Unfourtunately i still don't know what pads are, i'm very limited ;) Where can i get samples? I really don't ahve many sources, i only like download soundfonts.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.