Absolutely, totally rad! Very catchy tune... not extremely fast at an enjoyable tempo with a tune that makes you want to move it. This should be played at a dance party... seriously.
A great drum beat(s) to go with it too. And there isn't anything just randomly chucked in or extra things to add more sounds in that made it sound bad... you've done it perfectly!
Thanks a lot, glad you like it! :D Stay tuned for the finished version, which will be even better. >:)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.