fun ID to type! 5th vote!

'Ey man! :)

Thats right. Keep at it, and keep striving to be better! :)

One thing, get a hold of some good VSTs and good samples. Vengeance Essential Clubsounds Vol 1 & 2 are the gods of samples. Then read all you can about mixing and mastering your sound, to make it sound clean. And then look into some melody construction techniques (well that first actually)

Its not sounding too bad :)

I know you've got the creativity for it, you just need the tools and medium to apply it! :)

Solid.

Too short. You should probably get a more fitting bass, that one dosen't work with me too well with this song. I was going to say something about the high note hitting synth, but that and the strings are the background is what keeps me listening. Good pace, I want to hear this as a full song.

good work

That's alot better than what I did at the start... keep going man that's a good loop! :P check out my stuff too if you've got nothing better to do haha.

voted 4

Seems like you are getting better!
Don't let anyone tell you otherwise. Always look at the bright side to things, and keep your head up. You're going to get people that are going to say your music isn't good, but if only one person likes you're songs, that's still enough to continue to strive and make music.

This song isn't bad! It's short, so no 5. It's a little slow paced for my tastes, but thats alright.
I would choose a different pad though, the one you have it too fat. It kinda drowns out everything around it.
The song is overall good.
Keep up the good work, and keep your head up. :)
-TMM43 (DJ-Pinke)
PS: Check out my song "Ride on me"!