I'm not sure but I think this song already exists?
Well whatever, If you done it it's really nice and that's why I rate 4 :)
i doubt it exists, and if it does I definitely have not heard it before. however, I have noticed that it resembles RHCP's 'Knock Me Down''s verse structurally, but the chords and progression are still different
When I first started this song it reminded me of Semi-Charmed Life by Third Eye Blind, but that's just me. Respect.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.