It sounded like a real band, nice job. I liked how you started off with the shaker, and kept it going throughout the song. Then tou added little bits and peices of tunes here and there. The thing I recommend taking off is the disorented beat at 47 and 55 seconds. You also cut off a lot of sounds at random near 1:11.
Keep it up though, you can make some pretty cool songs if you try hard enough. =P
Thanks...I'll work on that
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