Surprisingly good stuff. I'll give you a 9, unofficially, however- It is not that your track is lacking, but it's not as fluid as it could be. Some transitions are quick and abrupt, and there is honestly nothing wrong with that. Though there are some instruments which throw the listener off.
Generally in trance it is the composer's prerogative to let the person slip away into the music. Thusly named 'trance'. This would be quicker a dance-ish track, if anything.
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Really nice job. Just for intro's try workong with differences in volume. It gives a really nice effect. Or use a submelody thats really low in volume. You can't almost not hear it, but it leaves the empty holes away.
Anyways nice work, couldn't have done it better.
its good but the beginning sucks ..
bump bump bump ! ... :P
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