I know what's missing!!
A good pair of drums at the beginning (not extreme beginning, but you get it) would make this AWESOME. Try adding some kick-ass drums and this will get the 10s flooding like you've never seen before, trust me. Deserves an 8, at least. I gave it a 5/5 as well. Keep it up ^_^
Thanks. I really don't know why this is getting such a low score...
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.