I downloaded the rough version, and now that I see this, DOWNLOADING AGAIN! w00T! ^^
Glad you like. =)
you got skill justlike me, i also use fl studio.
The whole song kicked ass. But the one part I dont like was in the beginning. The melody seemed quite strange. When the song kicked in, I loved it. The acid bass thing was really cool. I use fl studio 7 as well, and maybe if we talk on aim, we could collab if you want too. AIM = tmse7en. Also before I go, I just uploaded a song and it's my first to newgrounds so it might not show up today. Please review it if you get the chance. Keep up the good work.
I would be very interested in collaborating. =) I've been a little busy since I submitted this song, and I have been unable to spend enough time on Newgrounds to listen/watch some of the things people who have commented have submitted. I will definitely check out everyone's work as soon as I have enough free time.
Thank you for the review!
Pros: I heard a lot of sweat and blood put into this. I can tell you put a good bit of effort in and it shows. The progressiveness of the song was a bit odd but overall ... I liked it. Nothing like a bit of "off the wall" production to make you bob your head a bit. As a raver this has a lot of very nice ups and downs that would really get my moving so kudos sir.
Cons: As the poster below stated in one sense or form ... maybe look into a bit more diverse instruments. That single synth that you used throughout the whole song added what it needed to but by the end it was a little ... well ... old.
5/5 (4.51/5.0 +0.020)
Overall ... amazing piece of work and I'm going to add you to my favorite artists list and I am pretty sure this song will be added to my most coveted "gamers play list" ... (thats a hard thing to achieve in my book btw).
As I said below, I don't consider myself a professional artist and know the basics about the progression of trance, but I can certainly try out different instruments. What I was trying to do was tie it all together so it didn't feel like a completely varying track from beginning to end.
Thank you very much for your review and suggestion. It will be highly considered!
Right = The song has a pretty catchy feeling to it. While it does have it's flaws, there's times where the song can take off in places. It's better than most Trance songs releasing lately on NGs, so you should honestly be proud of that.
Wrong = You progressed/mastered the song a little weird. First off, you did the right thing at the start, the mono synth and the beat were good, but what should follow probably 16 or 32 bars after the very intro should just be the addition of the acid bass. If you need an example, my song Wicked my come to of some help. All you would really need to do is keep on adding and adding to that first beat, keep it consistent, and then hit the break that would go into the melody. This is all of course if you're trying to make a Progressive/Melodic Trance.
You could use a little more diverse synths. The main synth was a bit overused and lacks the quality of a professional sound,I guess I should say it should be a more crisp synth, so those notes can be better acknowledged. It's also got to be a bit catchy along the way before the melody, which you seem to of distributed a pretty catchy beginning.
I really can't help much here. I just don't know what kind of Trance your trying to master here. At times it does remind me of Progressive, but then at other times it comes across as Club/GOA.
Anyways, what do I know >.<
I don't consider myself a professional. Honestly, I know very little about music (which would explain the wrong points), but I create songs that sound good to me. I would say that the arp definitely comes off as Goa.
I have already heard some of your music, and your review is very helpful in the certain aspects of progressive trance that I seem to be missing. I will take your words into heavy consideration and may even edit the song itself and submit a newer, better version. Thank you!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.