Opportunity to improve
Im seeing a general trend in much of your work. You've got a passable starting beat, but then the song does nothing. Absolutely nothing. It stays the same for one or two minutes and then ends. The reason why a lot of songs out there are getting 4s and 5s (I very rarely give 5s) is because they have a great beginning, take the song somewhere over the course of two or three minutes, and then have a good ending. Repeating a set of five or six beats for two minutes won't earn you anything.