Like the other guy said, this really isn't as tragic as it is rage-like.
Add some more instruments, extend it, maybe splice in some other Star Wars themes....
It would be even better with that.
This was always my favorite song from Star Wars, it carried tragedy to it, yet it could be used easily for other things.
This doesn't really sound tragic at all, if anything this kinda sounds like a Jedi Rage. You should make a longer one with some more instruments, and if you want to go for a tragedy sort of sound, try going with softer instruments, wind instruments and violins usually work good as well as piano, acoustic guitar over electric perhaps, or it could be neat to see how a electric could work with the previous stated instruments.
yea like the other dude said if it was longer and maybe had drums bass a little more to add to it, to give it a bigger more dynamic feel. But tbh its damn good.
Damn man that was awesome. Just wish it was longer, like over a minute or so. Keep up the good work.
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