I like it..
The bass melody near the beggining sounded very good with the pad you had going there. Around 00:48 it sounds pretty good, although you havent really added much else.
The arrpegiated synth that comes in afterwards, i gotta admit, sounds very good. You did a good job with that. The percussion could use a little work, but no-ones perfect. Anyway the ending was not so good, you probably needed a crash or at least some kind of hit there. Anyway, not bad yo. Keep improving :3
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.