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Just finished making this. It's corny, but still pretty cool.



Ok! That's it! You're going in my list of favourites!


Alright... I will categorically state why I think that this still needs work...

For one the pads sound like a cheesy 80's synth, unless that's what you were going four. The drums... don't sound realistic at all, and even if they did they lack punch and don't really make the song any better, mostly because the crash symbol is too splashy.

The intro is too long for a pop song. 22 seconds for a 2:19 work isn't gonna cut it in the pop realm. I think this is really more ambient than anything else, becuase it doesn't have Trance drums and it doesn't have vocals meaning it can't truly be considered pop (because how many pop songs lack vocals?0

Good effort, but you gotta get some better drums, becuase they sort of ruin it. And write some corny lyrics and wrangle a vocalist. :D

I like the ideas though.

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VegetarianMeat responds:

Yup, this is a rather crummy song, and I agree with you on all of your points :P I always tend to overdo it with my intros. Thanks for the review :)


Your string is kinda ripply. Other than that, its cool. But this feels more Trance than popular.
Doesn't matter, nice work.

the music is good

but the sound quality needs to be upgraded, a lot of people who post up music seem to have this problem.


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3.72 / 5.00

Jan 31, 2008
7:30 PM EST
File Info
2.1 MB
2 min 19 sec

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