Dense. Track. Atleast it surrounds me. That it does do. The blips earlier on and for awhile just don't assist eachother. Separate melodic riffs going and once seems like a balance. They feel almost like they're in different keys. Which in essence they are so throughout the song you seem to have a clashing effect of two melodic instruments going on than you add 3rd one on that doesn't really play into either of the others. The song seems very mad at itself in general as nothing cooperates well. Also the percussion just has no underbelly to it. Very basic. Everything hits right on the beat. Hihats cymbals claps and drums have way to much cooperation. Another thing I find is the song has no true transitions and actually never builds to anywhere. It seems to just drops sounds down without introducing them. It's sounds very basic.
-The main flaw to me is the battling melodics. Just didn't generate a vibe to the song as the listening to the fighting sounds made it difficult to actually enjoy. Form-wise the song just seems to pick rather randomly what happens next. Drums drop in and out and melodies suddenly stop & go. Balance wasn't to much of a problem but was not very good either. Basic rhythms where all the percussion does the exact same thing.
Keep producing...we'll see what happens.