I was bored too.
Yeah in general. The song lacked transitions and never built upwards. Instead it declined in general. I don't know man. Good attempt but it just wasn't anything special.
I would just like to tell you that my last 3 submissions were using the DEMO version of FL Studio 7 and they all suck. I didn't have the time to make them perfect so these were just like a test to see how the program handled.