here we go now
nothing is the same, its a daily life livin in this empty game. the truth is all between ur fingers, we live our lives wit empty sinners. cmon, cherish it while we last. the game moves by so fast, nothing is meant to last, when u look back, itl all be gone in a flash. when i look up at the sky, its so hard not to cry, makes me wonder if ima live till im 25. the death in da streets happens so rapidly, let alone so steadily. to all my brothas ive lost in da streets, my n***as rest in peace.I said my n***as rest in peace.
yo man i love this beat great job bra, ill make a nasty track to this man damn good shit. that was just a free verse keep it up man i think i might even write to this 1 man its too ill. keep it real 1!
dam shit is tight ya right somethin to it and email it to us email@example.com me and my friend are gunna lay somethin down on it and if ur shit is good i put u in a verse
Good, but repetitive.
This song is dope as hell, man.
One problem, though: It's VERY repetitive.
Always try some variation.
iight thanks for the feedback
this is tight man! keep doing your thing homie, this is nice. i feel it. deep meaning man
thanx for the comment and 10/10 ya this is one of the m ddep meaning shit i might lay a trakc down with this one