I think the fade before drop at 1:00 was a bit long and strong -- and did not enjoy the repeat at 1:13 of the same effect, though it was more subtle. I think some other transition could have been done here, as the mix is not very thick to warrant it.

The lead at 1:42 is a hair loud

I praise your chord structures and driving bassline.

2:03 that lead could probably use a pingpong delay and a slightly quieter volume.

I feel like we are moving into house at 2:27. Chip house? VG house? Sounds cool. I want more volume out of kick and snare throughout. The low pass crush is making it hard to cut through. I think a crispier treatment would do the snare well.

Overall, good piece. I think I would like to hear a bit more expressive modulation on your flute lines, bring them out a bit more, and a little less low-pass feeling to the track overall. Not bad at all though! The concept is really cool, and so is the cover