I'm not the music critic genious but I'll tell you at least what I thought.
Overall it wasn't a bad song for a piano solo. Good attempt with my guess limited equipment or you're just starting out. The steps at the first of the song till roughly 0:24 and again at 1:00 seem a little to 'alone' for my personal taste. Maybe try revamping that may make it sound better.
One man's opinion. A for effort.
Thanks for the review, I did just start, but I really struggle with the concepts of composition. I do reviews a lot better, so I guess I can critique you on your review. What do you mean by alone? It was unclear, and also please elaborate on "revamping" cause I just started and don't know how that works. lol. Thanks for you input, it helped. Please more advise in the future would be deeply appreciated. I believe songs like this should have more instrumentation, but I'm not smart enough to incorporate them.
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