I'm giving you 5 stars for this piece because there is potential...and the fact I love Spanish influenced music. If you tinker around more with this piece I am for certain you will have something to be very proud of.
Also, this piece gives the listener a 'visual' of the main character recalling his/her past...if you get my meaning.
Again, there is potential...just take your time and 'feel' the flow of the music. ^_^