I like this track, the beat would be better if you dropped it. And when you do drop it.. use less kicks. this song has some potential.. You still got much to learn though, keep practicing
I like the initial sound at the beginning, but this doesn't develop into anything interesting. With a cool sound like what you have in the intro you can really build a PHAT beat underneath, but the beat just seems uninspired and pretty bland.
I feel you man. Believe it or not, I totally agree with you. I mean I still really like this beat, but I had a completely different vision for it. I started it with that sound at the intro and then I just couldn't develop it into what I wanted. Ill probably remix it.
steppin it up a tiny bit, but..
cloud, u did not say u dont like my voice. u clearly said that my voice is gay, im a homo im a girl, the list could go on. thats the typa shit u said. u tryna cover up for urself now that u realizin that everybody thinks the opposite to what u think of me.
i aint tryna provoke u either. iv already told u that i aint gon respond til u act a lil more maturely. man, i cud show every single thing said in those pm's, but thats jus a waste of time n wud show me as somebody with no life. but u can do that if u want, show everybody what each pm said, and theyll see its a lil mlore than: i dont like ur voice.
stay up fan. i need people like u to motivate me bruh!~
Coulda done better.
Like the style tho. Just repetitive. As much as hip-hop is a repetitive genre, a lil bit more versatility would be good.
And why are you hating on P-Balla? You say he can't make music, yet i hear everyone else on here and they aint half as good. Anyway keep at it, i hope you aint one of those ppl who lays disses on everyone and thinks he is better than others.
its a pretty nice track
Seriously though its got some pretty cool instrumentation, The way the rythem goes is pretty tight.. My only complaint is the (For lack of better wording for this) background loop gets annoying after a while. Other then that man this is a pretty hot track!