I really don't like your voice!
Let someone else do the singing, because frankly, I can't hear if you're a guy or a girl.
This song was a well produced, awesome track. Your voice is really different, and really like it when your saying faster words, but sometimes it sounds a little off when you hold notes for long periods of time. The lyrics in this song kick ass, keep on making music.
I like it
I think that the guitar is very...well, it's kind of basic indie..but it's VERY nice! I love the chorus...and the bridge really does bring in the mood for it :)
I think you have a great voice...however, I don't think you were quite as warmed up as you thought you should be...it sounds like you rush some parts a bit too much...but I really like your voice. My favorite thing is still the chorus!
If you get a chance, listen to my song :)
You remind me of me :)
Hey i like the song and the other one (leaving one review for both songs because im lazy lol). You remind me of myself in the sense that my songs are usually just acoustic guitar and vocals. Don't listen to anyone who tells you not to use your voice. You've got a really nice voice. Its refreshing to hear a singer who doesnt sound emo or horribly generic.
Having said that though i have got a few tips:
Try to explore some genres which aren't too "poppy". Some darkness in a song really makes the happier bits sound 10 times more happy.
In songs like this and the other one, they could really do with a bass layer. Infact thats a tip for most songs using metal stringed acoustic guitars. They just dont have enough tune for themselves and a bass layer would really compliment the vocals.
Good stuff though :) Keep it up
You have a good voice.
Please don't start making instrumentals like Fknox suggests.
Newgrounds has enough of those.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.