I agree with Zero
I know you made the beats faster than before because they were quarter notes then 8th notes after but occasionally they were getting jammed at certain points, i dont know how to explain this well and I cant link it, but 1= the hit and 0= no hit, this is what it was like
1 0 1 0 11 0 101, ya im confused to, but it was not on beat half the time, to put it to simple words.
Its supposed to be like a raised heartbeat calming down then turning a hallway and BAM a zombies infront of you.
Watch your tempo ;)
The beat of the background loop, and the actually melody of what sounds like a synth/piano aren't synced together. It sounds like the one is playing a totally different kind of song...
Perhaps use a metronome to stay with the beat.
You could also use more echo on the melody.
And of course, perhaps some variation in the bass?
I agree with you, however I thought that this was supposed to be more like backround music that didn;t really have a melody. Just there to creep you out.
I'll try harder next time.
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