really cute I enjoyed it, nice voice 8/10
this is a great song.
the vocals, i have to admit is very good.
the quality is great.
one thing i would prefer is, the deeper louder vocals. i think this song would be much better with the deeper voice and the stronger more confident voice.
other than that, it satisfys me
i know i prolly sounded quite 'uncertain' with the singing... simply coz i learnt the song a day before, and was reading the words when recording the vocals...
Avoid the scoops
You do a lot of vocal scoops in this song, and they make the vocals not as good as your could probably make them. The piano was good, but the scoops make your notes a little wavy so that when you hit them they sound, as I guess people think, "unnatural".
Also, you try to do the tremolo with your voice, during the chorus you do it a lot, and it isn't as good as it should be (it's still pretty good) but for a song like this it needs to be perfect for it to sound good.
Anyhoo those are my constructive comments for this song, It was still really good. I hope you get some help from it.
Very good, almost great
This is a rather good cover, I do admit. However, I can only offer a 4/5 and a 7/10 because of the singing. It's not horrible by any stretch of the imagination, it's just not quite what I was expecting when I heard the quality of the instrumental sections.
At times the singer is pitchy and a little too hesitant or eager, resulting in a word or two either being rushed or out of place. While it may not happen very often, it's noticible when it occurs.
Still, like I said, this is a rather good cover and with a little bit of love here or there (or just an instrumental version of the song) and I would vote it higher.
yeah i know what you mean
in all fairness i recorded as a favor to a friend, i only learned the song, by ear, the day before. i had no chords to work with, only some random video on yourube that plays the song in the backgrounds.
and yeah what you were describing tends to happend when you read the words youre singing/recording
Music is great, you should improve the vocals tho.
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