Not bad, but definitly needs more dynamics.
I reckon that this is a very early work from you. You can put a lot more ideas in it, this kind of sounds bland and dry, but with multiple layers, this can sound awasome.
Keep it up, you have potential!
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Not bad, but definitly needs more dynamics.
I reckon that this is a very early work from you. You can put a lot more ideas in it, this kind of sounds bland and dry, but with multiple layers, this can sound awasome.
Keep it up, you have potential!
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