Ouch, I felt the fuck out of those lyrics. My heart is with you
I think the sections of "breaking up mentally" are mixed pretty well on vocals
the hihat at 1:07 is LOUD. Please turn it down some -- snare/kick should be the loudest elements in the drop, followed by vocal, lead, and bass turned up to push the track.
Your synths on the side at the drop are also quite loud. I want more bass, much more vocal, more clap. Actually a lot more clap. Less reverb will help clarity.
You know, I think just taking down the synths on the side and pumping the center vocal will fix a lot of issues. Also turning down the lead on non-drop sections. The mix is just top heavy and the hihats are partly to blame there.
But writing wise, this is classic house and I adore it.