Was alright for what it was. Your transition didn't really flow well. They just seemed to drop into each other. The percussion was also very random at points and very undefined. The song really never gave me a sense of reason. And as a instrumental that really doesn't have a form to fit vocals it just very point-less. Nothing stood out about this song that would have me come back to it again to listen once more. It just was ok.
not to bad!
very interseting song and it could be pretty trippy. I think a lil more work on this and it would shine even more then it does now.. Though it does sound pretty awesome right now! Great work thus far and keep it up!