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Jan 27, 2008 | 5:35 PM EST
File Info
801.3 KB
52 sec
4.15 / 5.00

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Rated 4.15 / 5 stars
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595 Plays | 85 Downloads
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Electronic - Techno

Author Comments

this is my first attempt i still havent rly learned how to use fruity loops so comments are gratefully appreciated

thx for the advice DJ UnKnOwN



Rated 5 / 5 stars


its great for your first song, but you could put some more time into it and make it 30 times better... 5/5 because your boyle.


Rated 5 / 5 stars

not bad

The song wasn't too bad considering its your first but it was pretty short. You should spend some more time on it and add about a minute to it and fix up some of the drums and synth. Its Dave btw. and ill give u 10/10 cuz im nice.


Rated 3 / 5 stars

YAY for construtive Critisizm!!!!!!!

There was a lot of clipping in this song. Which is due to how loud your drums and synths and FX are. To solve this, just either lower the volume or add a Fruity Compressor. Right after the 5th second, there is a lot of distortion probably due to distortion.

This song overall wasnt bad, it just lacked some basic musical things. Structure, melody and some other things

This song wasnt structured too well, although there werent anything off-beat, there were a lot of random things. I heard a little pad at :12 which i thought was pretty cool, but then you get right back into the bass and drums. then i think a silver saw comes in :33 with a platnium saw backround, i know you attempted a melody, and i completely understand this is your first song, but it's very random and repeatitive, make a longer piano roll by switching up the notes and stuff.

OH and the kick at the beginning was a little plain, add in a FX or something to spice it up, the beginning is one of the most important things in the song.

Wow... long review
Overall good job, but a 6/10 and 5/5 cause i <3 you.