the rest is empty but the begining, that
change is awesome DONt tell me im an asshole reviewers i dont mean to give him this 10, im just giving him a good score because i know he is a great artist! right? yeah a thought so....lol this did need a bit more work and i could tell you didnt make it in your best quality, make more like electronic symphony remixed, then you will get much greater scores, -jackson tyler-
Uhhhhhhh, It's a work in progress.
I cant figure out what is wrong precisely with the song, it is just...off. I have identified some key problems.In multiple parts it seems to building up for something, but then levels off and leaves you hanging, wondering what happened. It in general seems too slow, (either that is the case or a problem of preference, your call). The piano really didn't fit in the piece well at all either, it simply was not integrated well enough, but thanks for trying.
It's different to begin with, and I like that. Second 33 starts off nice, I like the transition. At about second 46 though is where I think you need to work a little. At 1 minute it sounds good. It sounds good at minute 1:40 as well. And I like the switch up at minute 2:06. Minute 2:23 is awesome...but I think alone...it doesn't fit too well into the song...but it sounds great when you hit 2:36. I will admit that I'm not a fan of the piano at the end of this song at all...I think it could be left out.
Overall, a good song. Needs a bit of refining, but not bad. I give it 8/10. Keep working on it guys. :)
Thanks man, yeah it still needs some work ; )
i think u need to spend more time on this track
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.