You don't have to tell me again!
I like the intro a lot, but it seems like most of the song is just building up to... very little. Instead of attatching more to the end, why not put a melody on top of some of the later parts of the song you already have?
Woohoo, nice track. Great background sounds, voice samples and intense beats, sounds like the perfect DnB, heh, great first submission. Looking forward to hear more from you, keep up the great work!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.