the last 30 seconds could use a little more bass
Forgot you had a seperate account!
The tone sounds pretty thick, man! My only suggestion is to do three tracks (or four, but your tone sounds like 3 will be enough) and do one centered, and then the other two panned all the way left and right. The lead sounds pretty cool, but I am sure there are tons of settings for that for you to mess around with further anyway.