i might use this, but itll be a long time till you see anything
Sounds like an opening sequence, like you said.
Good work, I think.
Thanks... I think...
You're guitar and compositional skills are really good, but I would definitely add a bass guitar to this (even a synth one) and maybe add some room reverb to the drums. I'm not going to comment on the vocals as I hope they're supposed to be funny. -3