Great!

Sounds a bit messy in the beginning, but it gets better and better as it goes along. Great guitarply, and a pretty unique funky beat at times too. Everything flows together nicely, keep up the good work!

-cd-

3/5

Well, the samples are nice, but none of it really goes together... especially the drums. The kick is somewhat out of place for the metal guitars, in my opinion. There is too much thump in it... well, that is until the middle. I guess it gets a little better near the middle.

Now, don't get me wrong. I kind of like the piece, you know? It's just a little to erratic for my better taste, so maybe you could do some improvements on it. Make sure the drums don't sound as quantized... and you can do this by modifying the velocities in some drum patterns. I like the minor chorus too, by the way. So, just keep practicing! You're doing good!

Take care,
Ka'eo