I say you should up the volume of your voice on this track. The instruments seem to overpower your voice.
Anyway, this is way better then your first version.
thanks man if i ever reopen this project i'll change the volumes after listening to it for a while i really am not to pleased with the volumes
This was nice of you to do for Pop-Pop!
He's home now and feeling better than before!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.