Alright, the sounds are great! They're really good quality. But I can tell that they are loops, and that the program you used is a lot like Garage Band... or IS Garage Band. How I can tell? After skimming through your song to each transition, none of it really went together. But, if you did keep everything sounding close to the same, it would all have been the same... because they are loops. Don't worry, though... it still sounds good to me. Just, don't expect so much praise for a song that is really kind of thrown together. Keep practicing like this, and later, move on to better sequencing programs like FL Studio or Reason.
thank you for the criticism. I really do appreciate it. Uh yes this was my very first one ever, so i wanted to post it and get some kind of idea. And no its not Garage Band but it is a program like it. and thanks again. ill work more on my next one